User blog:TheLorax/Scream 5 if I was in charge (3/3)

Here's the conclusion to my Scream 5 story. It's a bit long for a final/third act, but it had to be because I left some vital details out of Act 2 on accident. Anyway, if you like it, leave a little feedback in the comments. Please. Please. Please.

PLOT (3/3)

Gale arrives at Windsor College in pursuit of Deputy Peter and Sheriff Dewey, she has a new "cameraman sidekick" named Harry. Dewey shows Sidney that he has determined that Jill's father is Hank Loomis, making him the father of two Ghostface killers. He then asks where Kirby is, as she is in grave danger if the Windsor College Murders are being remade (she survived without being part of the trio, just like Randy did, meaning that she might die in the vein of Randy). Sid answers that Kirby is away at the premier of Stab 8; Dewey tells her that Peter is there, too. However, the premier is cancelled out of respect for Tim and Judy. Kirby decides to host an after-party. At the after-party, Ghostface strikes, killing Robert. Kirby, Gale, Dewey, Peter, and Sid flee outside, where they see Ghostface a second time. He tries to kill Sidney, but Peter gets in the way and is stabbed. The others run back inside. They split up into groups: Dewey and Gale; Kirby and Sidney. Kirby is attacked, but buys time for Sid to run. Sid hides in a room, locking the door; she suddenly notices a secret compartment in the wall. She finds a cloak, knife, and gun in the compartment. Peter pounds on the door at that moment, revealing himself to be alive, but drenched with blood. Sid shows him the evidence and he activates his iPod, about to summon Dewey to the room. However, he instead turns on the Ghostface app mentioned in Scream 4 and mutters, "Surprise, Sidney" into it, revealing himself as the killer. Sidney runs from him, but a second Ghostface is standing in the doorway. The second Ghostface reveals himself to be Harry. She looks at the two of them and asks "Why?" to which Harry replies, "I want revenge for my daughter, Jill", thus revealing himself as Hank in a disguise. Hank recounts that during Jill's toddler days, he was the ultimate father, while Kate was verbally abusive toward Jill. Hank eventually had to walk out on his second family due to Kate's behaviour. He planned to use his status as a lawyer to re-adopt Jill one day, until Sidney killed Jill in self-defense. Without a daughter, son, or any chance to become a grandfather, Hank conspired with Peter to have revenge against Sidney. Peter was lacking a father figure and was gladly adopted by Hank; when Sid asks why Peter had no father figure, Peter reveals that he is her other half-brother. The son of Cotton Weary and Maureen Prescott, he was put up for adoption by the couple in order to hide his existence from Neil. Hank saw Peter as a more respectful version of Billy and trained him to kill Sidney....like he had trained Billy. "WHAT?!" asks Sid. Hank laughs and informs her that after Maureen's death, he found out about Billy's involvement and incited Billy to go on a killing spree in Woodsboro, the ultimate revenge "from the Loomises to the Prescotts". Sid runs, but Peter dives for her. Peter gets the upper hand and says, "The perfect brother-sister moment right here". He pulls her to her feet and continues, "We're not finished. The best part is our plan". He shows that their confession was filmed, but he turns off the camera and deletes the footage. While Hank holds Sidney at knife-point, Peter uploads footage of every kill onto a tape. He then grabs Leigh from a nearby closet and throws her to the ground, all tied up and draped in a blanket. He reveals that they plan to frame her as the killer and proceeds to, in a nod to Stu, chuckle "This is the best part" while he places the cloak inside of the blanket. He then puts the mask on Leigh's head. While she still has the mask on, he shoots her in the forehead. Peter and Hank then stab each other like Billy and Stu once did. Hank gets carried away and stabs Peter in the heart accidentally. As Peter collapses, he reaches out to feel Sid's leg, and she kneels down. He says that he wishes that he could've been a better brother to her, and that he loves her. She whispers "I love you too" right before he smiles and dies. Hank decides to frame Peter as Leigh's accomplice just as Sidney runs out of the room. Hank chases her and eventually knocks her down. He raises his knife in the air and laughs, about to stab her. However, they both hear a distant gunshot. It's Dewey, firing a warning shot for Hank to get away from Sid. Hank gets up, but runs in the other direction. Dewey tries with all of his might to shoot Hank in the back of the head succesfully. He does. Sidney and Dewey embrace, while Gale shows up and leads them outside. Reporters are everywhere. Kirby is being carried off on a stretcher. One reporter asks them for the story. The trio toss glances at each other and begin to tell her.

That's my story. I hope that you liked it. It's what I would want Scream 5 to be. Anyway, please leave some feedback in the comments section. Were you surprised at the killers being Peter and Hank?