User blog:TheLorax/An alternate version of Scream

Hi. Uh, I was inspired by another blog post to write my own version of the first movie. It's not finished, but here are my ideas. If they suck, and they probably do, don't shoot me.

Also, my version takes place in winter.

Killers: Tatum Riley and Randy Meeks

Survivors: Sidney, Billy Loomis, Stu Macher, Dewey Riley, Gale Weathers

Victims:

-Casey and Steve. Plays out the same way as in the real version, except that the part with Casey being hung from the tree is cut out. Randy is the caller, and Tatum is the killer.

-Attacking Sidney: Randy attacks Sidney in her house, and Billy arrives to comfort her. Same old thing.

-Call'n'stalk: At Tatum's house, Sidney is called by Randy. After she hangs up, you can see Ghostface right outside Tatum's bedroom window. This is also Randy, as Tatum is with Sidney.

-Unnamed Secretary: An invented character. Killed by Tatum right outside the school.

-Principal Himbry: Killed by Tatum. Happens right after the secretary's death. Also, it is a tiny bit less bloody than in the real version.

- Attempt on Billy at the party: In the bedroom scene, at Stu's house. Randy stabs Billy, who cleverly "plays dead" so that Randy thinks that he is dead and goes on to chase Sidney.

-Sherrif Burke: Tatum, as Randy was busy chasing Sidney. He found Dewey in the woods with Gale and yelled at Dewey for not being with the kids, but is attacked from behind by Tatum. Dewey and Gale flee, and Tatum places Burke's body in Neil's car.

-Kenny: Killed by Randy in the van. Sidney is not present.

Motives:

-Tatum and Dewey had another brother, but when Tatum and Sidney, inseperable friends even then, were about 5 or 6,  there was a accident and it killed their brother but Sidney of course survived. Tatum could have blamed Sidney for the accident and vowed to make her pay but she had to pretend to be over it so she could get Sidney's trust. Dewey of course never blamed Sidney.

-Randy basically has Charlie's motive. Sidney didn't give him a chance, so Tatum takes advantage of him and manipulates him to her side. What boy wouldn't let Tatum manipulate them? Look at her!

Tatum gets the gun from Sidney, and when Billy appears from upstairs, Tatum accuses him and shoots him in the chest. Randy appears and reveals himself as the killer. Tatum pretends to be scared with Sidney, until unveiling the voice changer. Tatum explains her motives, and Randy watches. Stu distracts them, and Sidney runs outside. Billy gets up and goes with her. They get onto a snow hill, and think that Stu has killed both Ghostfaces. However, Tatum tackles Sidney from behind, and Randy challenges Billy to a fistfight. Stu helps Billy, but both Billy and Randy knock Stu off of the snow hill.

Tatum and Sidney wrestle, with Tatum strangling Sidney, and getting the upper hand. Meanwhile, Randy continues to fight, despite being a geek against Billy the athlete. Sidney grabs a piece of ice and knocks Tatum out, very temporarily, by hitting her in the head with it. Sidney and Stu both help Billy, with Stu showing extreme skills (and malovence) by strangling Randy. Tatum saves Randy by punching Stu out. Sidney slams into Tatum, and they wrestle again, while Billy and Randy punch each other until Randy stabs Billy in the shoulder. Billy climbs back up the hill, but is grabbed by Randy at the top. Before Randy can stab Billy again, Dewey appears and shoots Randy in the chest.

Sidney and Tatum struggle to the top, while Dewey has his gun raised, as Billy has just explained that there is a second killer. Dewey sees Tatum and can't shoot her. Tatum is distracted, allowing Sidney to grab her and hold her in place by the waist. Sidney wants Tatum to be arrested, but not killed. Tatum struggles, pulling free of Sidney, but her struggle causes her to fall off of the hill. She hits her head on a frozen puddle, and she instantly dies in front of Dewey. Billy mentions that one of them might come back to life. Randy does, screaming, but is shot a second time by Dewey in the same area. Stu is still alive and wakes up, and while reporters arrive at the Macher house, the film peacefully closes.

Anyway, there it is. You don't have to read it, but if you did, leave some feedback in the comments section. Bye!