User blog:ScreamKing93/This is how Scream would have gone if I had written it :)

Okay so as the title of the blog says this is what would have happened if I had written Scream with the same characters and almost identical on screen personalities as they had in the actual movie. I also did Scream 2 but I won't post them if nobody really cares xD I would like everyone's opinion on it. I did come up with the plot all in one night and it was solely my idea to do so but y'all can be brutal if you want to be haha.

The original Scream would be as follows;

The target(s) of the killer(s); Sidney Prescott

The killer(s); Billy Loomis and Tatum Riley (Joint main)

The victims in the opening are Mrs Becker and Steve Orth. Casey was the intended target but she and her father had made a visit to a relative leaving Mrs Becker to take her place. The reason behind these murders were for the town to be in fear mode and also as practice kills for Tatum because Billy questioned her ability to go through with actually murdering someone. Mrs Becker is murdered by Tatum alone then Steve who is tied to the chair (Like the original) is gutted by Billy and the pair mutilate him so more to leave a nasty scene for Casey and Mr Becker when they arrive home.

Main movie victims:

Kenny; Murdered in the News Van. Killed to send a message to the press that the killer has a score to settle. He was also helping Gale in her 'Free Cotton Weary' campaign. Murdered by Tatum

Gale; They kill Gale because they fear she is close to convincing Sidney of Cotton's innocence. Murdered by Billy

Himbry; A kill that was implemented as all the students including Billy and Tatum and to make up the numbers. Murdered by Billy Loomis.

Sheriff Burke; Murdered by Billy after he saves Sidney from an attack.

Casey Becker; Murdered and mutilated by Tatum. Killed so Billy would be released from jail as this kill happens while he is in custody but she gets the most violent death because Tatum knew Billy and her used to have a fling and she wanted her to die earlier but she avoided it.

Neil; Killed by both Billy and Tatum each with their own reason, Billy partly blames Neil for what happened between Hank and Maureen as he was 'obviously a bad husband' and his mothers abandonment of him and Tatum because she wanted Sidney to suffer like she did by losing her father too.

Dewey Riley; Murdered by Tatum who feels remorse afterwards. She kills him because he becomes too close to Sidney and begins to get suspicious of Billy again. He is the last victim of Ghostface.

False death; Tatum Riley. Almost identical to Billy's in the original except this time the bedroom scene is Tatum and Stu and then a short chase with Stu ensues. (This is done as Tatum is one of the only characters besides Stu without an alibi. Also, this happens between Neil's and Dewey's deaths.)

Survivors;

Stu, Randy, Sidney

The motives for each killer

First off I should note that Billy and Tatum are secretly dating behind their respective partners backs and have been since just before Maureen's murder.

Billy Loomis: His motive is virtually the same as the original the only difference is that he only dated Sidney to cover his tracks and to take her virginity in order to kill her. (His motive was too good to really change and I felt it didn't need to be changed)

Tatum Riley: She blamed Sidney for her father's death as he died saving Tatum and Sidney from an incoming lorry when they were out playing at the age of 11. She felt a lot of pain and nobody was really there for her and when everyone ran to Sidney's aid when Maureen was murdered she seethed with jealousy and hate that she started secretly hating Sidney for it. She helped Billy plot against Sidney because one she hated Sidney deep down and was jealous of her to an extent and two because she loved Billy and believed they were meant to be. (I should also note that Billy never intended to kill Maureen in the first place and Tatum was not actively involved in the murder of Maureen, only framing Cotton. Billy snapped at Maureen and it drove him insane after killing her.)

That's a lot to read... I get it if y'all thought "Screw reading that" but I would like feedback on it and like I said all the way up there, I do have a Scream 2 to it as well. :) It did take me quite a long time but I thought you fellow Screamers would be interested in something like this and maybe even do your own? I'd love to read your ideas! :D

I realized I missed off some vital details like the killers deaths and how they planned on getting away so I thought I would elaborate that now.

They were trying to frame Stu along with Cotton Weary as the killers. Cotton was in jail so Tatum and Billy made Stu appear to be continuing where Cotton left off on Cotton's behalf in order to get him out of jail.

Tatum's death; After revealing all about why, Stu distracts Tatum and Billy and Sidney breaks away leading to Tatum chasing her down (Billy hunts for Stu and he hides) Tatum catches Sidney on the stairs and they scuffle which Tatum appears to win as she raises her knife to stab Sidney but she herself is then shot by Randy and Tatum is lifeless.

Billy's death; Billy spends several moments searching for Stu but he has no luck in finding him. Billy hears the gunshot and moments later after he realizes Tatum has been killed he runs to the survivors with his knife raised, like a mad man where he is gunned down by Randy and Sidney in a hail of bullets.

Last scare; Tatum. She jumps up as the survivors leave and stabs Stu in his arm viciously but is cut short by Sidney when she shoots her in the head.

There that should about cover it I think :)