User blog:Brandon James/2x01 Opening (please read)

*This is my opening for the new season of Scream, it only contains the opening so far.

''Please read, thanks. Comment below your opinions. ''

Wren Lake,  Lakewood (4 months after Season One Finale)
SCORE: (scream score) Daisy Bell (slowly fades as the scene fades in)

The CAMERA zooms into Wren Lake on a late night.'' A male, Tyler Hanson in his 30s, sits on the edge of the dock trying to catch fish. The guy's phone rings, he picks the phone up and answers it. ''

''Tyler: I'm not having any luck, Jack. ''

Jack: (on the phone) Me neither, are you going back to the van yet?

''Tyler: Give it another hour i'm sure i'll catch something. ''

Jack (on the phone): Maybe you'll catch Brandon James, alive 

Tyler: Yeah right.

''Jack (on the phone): Just catch some fish and get your ass back to the van. We are over schedule, this is a job you know.''

''Tyler: Fine. One more hour and i'll meet you at the van. ''

''Jack (on the phone): Fine. Just keep a watch out (mocks) for Brandon James. ''

''Tyler: That legend has surpassed it's sell-by date, it's just an urban legend now. ''

''Jack (on the phone- laughs/mocks): Urban Legend?, you know nothing do you. ''

''Tyler: Come on, back-off. I thought you wanted me to get on with this. ''

''Jack (on the phone): Yeah. Don't forget an hour and that's it. The mayor nearly took our jobs because we over stayed our welcome, don't mess it up or both of our jobs will be on the line.''

Tyler: I know but i mean I like fishing though what kind-of town has Fishing as a job, i'd rather do this on my own accord.

''Jack (on the phone): We get paid, man. Come on, you want to keep this job more than I do. ''

''Tyler: Okay, one-hour then we'll get back. ''

''Jack (on the phone): Fine, see you back at the van. Wait, (speaking away from the phone) Who the hell are you?..''

Tyler: What's wrong?....

Jack (on the phone): Someone is watching me.

Tyler: It's probebly Michael, he wanted to get you back after that stunt you pulled.

Jack (on the phone/to the person) Hey, if this is a joke i'm busy. (shouting) Wait!, wait!

''The stalker's foot steps can be heard and then the phone goes dead!...Tyler sits unconvinced the 'attack' was actual, he goes on contacts and calls Jack back. The phone rings but instantly goes 'missed'. ''

Tyler sends him a message via messenger:

"What the hell happened, man?"
He puts his phone down and clutches his Fishing rod into the lake.

''Tyler: (to himself) Come on, if you can get a girl you can get a fish. ''

''DING! a message sends to Tyler; He click on the message and it's Jack with a reply:''

"I'm fine. It was a prank ;)"
Tyler grins and types another message:

"Jack, where are you?."
''DING! A message pops up onto Tyler's phone, Tyler clicks onto the message and he realizes the senders name has changed to "Unknown". "unknown" has sent him a message:''

"Hello, Tyler"
''As he reads the message the person sent. Tyler notices a hoodied-freak wearing the Brandon James mask standing behind him. In horror, Tyler looks to the "Brandon James" killer and he notices a silver bladed knife shining in the moon-light, Tyler screams in terror as the knife plunges into his face. Tyler's terrifiyed screaming stops as blood splatters onto the Wren Lake dock, his phone drops onto the dock. At the same time Tyler's dead and stiff hands release the fishing rod, it splashes into the lake. Tyler collapses onto his pool of blood, lifeless. ''

''Watching his 'work-of-art', "Brandon James" stands in a deathly scilence. The killer pulls his waterproof hoodie from around his head and lifts the mask. But as we see the face of the killer, it cuts to black.''

''TITLE CARD: A SLIVERY LINE SLASHES ACROSS A BLACK SCREEN AND CREATES THE TITLE "SCREAM". ''


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